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Writopia Lab Comes to Rockland County!

 

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We are incredibly excited to announce the first EVER series of Writopia workshops in Rockland county! Cuppa Pulp Writers’ Space will offer workshops for ages 7-18. Workshops will take place Wednesdays and Thursdays after school, and Saturday afternoons. The full schedule is below. Please visit writopialab.org to register! We are listed with the Westchester/Fairfield programs. 

About Writopia Lab

Writopia Lab was founded in New York City in April of 2007. Workshops have a maximum of seven students and are led by a published author or produced playwright who has been fully trained in the Writopia time-tested methodology. In each of the past six years, Writopia students have won more recognition for their writing than any other group of students in the nation. Recent honors include: the most regional and national medals from the Scholastic Writing Awards in the nation; the nation’s top 2012 and 2013 Scholastic Awards Scholarships for Gold Medal Portfolioists; the 2012 and 2013 NYC Teen Literary Honor from New York Mayor Michael R. Bloomberg;  and a 2013 YoungArts Scholar Award.

That’s all to simply say that Writopia takes young writers seriously. Just as serious is Writopia’s dedication to a youth-centered experience. A national community of young writers, Wriotipa Lab fosters joy, literacy, and critical thinking in children and teens from all backgrounds through creative writing. As a 501(c)3 non-profit, Writopia Lab offers sliding scale fees to families in need.

Along  with Writopia, we look forward to welcoming a new generation of writers to Cuppa Pulp!

Nanuet Workshop Schedule: 

Wednesdays, beginning January 7th
4:00 p.m. – 5:30 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 9 – 10
4:00 p.m. – 5:30 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 11 – 13
5:45 p.m. – 7:15 p.m. (Teen Portfolio), Ages: 14+

Thursdays, beginning January 8th
4:00 p.m. – 5:30 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 7 – 8
4:00 p.m. – 5:30 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 9 – 10
4:00 p.m. – 5:30 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 11 – 13

Saturdays, beginning January 10th
1:30 p.m. – 3:00 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 7 – 8
1:30 p.m. – 3:00 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 9 – 10
3:15 p.m. – 4:45 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 11 – 13
3:15 p.m. – 4:45 p.m. (Creative Writing), Ages: 14+

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Triple Threat Author Panel–Witches, Murderers, and Aliens!

Saturday, October 25 4pm panel discussion on publishing, signing to follow

Right in time for Halloween, authors of crime, paranormal, and science fiction genres share their know-how in the fields of electronic and self publishing. M.A. Marino (Witch Way), C.E. Grundler (No Wake Zone, Last Exit in New Jersey), and Richard Herr (Tales from the StarBoard Café) will elucidate the pros and cons of electronic and self publishing.

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Panel discussion facilitated by Donna Miele, Cuppa Pulp founder, who managed editing and publication of Born Minus: From Shoeshine Boy to News Publisher, An Italian-American Journey, an autobiography of Armand Miele, publisher of the Rockland County Times.

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M. A. Marino, author of Witch Way

M.A. Marino grew up just outside of New York City, spending most of her formative years outdoors creating wild ghost hunts with neighborhood kids, setting booby-traps to capture unwitting family members, and building clubhouses on top of ten-foot walls. Marino has a Master of Fine Arts in Creative Writing. Marino primarily writes sci-fi/fantasy, paranormal romance, and young adult stories.

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Richard Herr, author of Invasion from Fred, Dog and Pony, and Tales from the StarBoard Cafe.

Richard Herr has three books out so far: Invasion From Fred, Dog and Pony, and Tales from the StarBoard Cafe. His books are humorous science fiction or fantasy. Fred is sci-fi and targeted to middle school young people on up to adult. Dog and Pony is urban fantasy that mostly takes place in NYC, so it’s got adult language. StarBoard is sci-fi and is a mosaic novel, a collection of short stories that have a plot running through them.

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C. E. Grundler, author of Last Exit in New Jersey and No Wake Zone

C.E. Grundler describes herself: I’m a diesel-driving double-clutching Jersey girl who spends too much time fixing boats and trucks, motoring, sailing, writing, and not behaving according to expectations. I live in northeast New Jersey with my husband, two dogs and assorted cats. Growing up aboard boats, I’ve sailed the region’s waters single-handed since childhood, and done a little of everything from boat restorations and repairs to managing a boatyard and working in commercial marine transportation. My work has been published in Boating on the HudsonOffshore Magazine and DIY Boat Owner Magazine. I divide my time between working on Annabel Lee, my 32-foot trawler, and writing. My novels, Last Exit In New Jersey
and No Wake Zone, are proof of that. I’m currently at work on the third book in the series:  Evacuation Route.

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Recent Highlights: Joanna Clapps Herman

Joanna Clapps Herman Primes the Pump at Cuppa Pulp Writers’ Space

 

Thursday night we threw open our doors for a craft talk with Joanna Clapps Herman, author of the recently released collection of short stories, No Longer and Not Yet. The sneak preview of our beautiful new space drew a crowd of new and veteran authors who gleaned insights and contributed to a lively discussion about the art and practicalities of writing.

“Where do you start? How do you find the conviction to create? What if your idea is really big? How do you protect yourself and others when you write about real experience?” Herman addressed these queries and counseled participants in strengthening their relationship to their craft.

An inspiring and vivacious speaker, Herman spoke movingly about her craft.

“You have to dig a tunnel for yourself,” Herman said. “Create a structure that you believe in, for no good reason… where you say ‘I am in this and nothing is going to stop me.’

“Go to the microcosm, the glimmer of thought, the half sentence. Don’t undervalue your tiniest idea.”

A Manhattanville College MFA professor, Herman also read from “Questa È La Vita (This Is the Life),” one of the stories in No Longer and Not Yet. Her writing, as Pam Katz says,”discovers the human connections that warm the asphalt and brick of New York, delivering benediction along with a healthy dose of humor.” Herman stressed the importance of building an artistic community and applauded Donna and Ken for founding CILK119. The sense of excitement was palpable and we can see that CILK119 is going to be fertile ground for growing great ideas and fruitful relationships.

Herman has published both fiction and nonfiction, creatively exploring the day-to-day lives of families and communities.
Check out her website at:  http://joannaclappsherman.com

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Cuppa Pulp Moves to CILK119

September 1, 2014

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Following a warm reception by local readers and writers since 2012, Cuppa Pulp needs to move–all the better to wrap its arms around a growing community, so to speak!  We hope you will visit soon at our new upstairs nook, CILK119 in Nanuet, NY, a shared workspace for professionals of a Creative ILK (get it?).

Better yet, join us for a sneak peek on September 18! Author and energetic writing professor Joanna Clapps Herman presents How Life Becomes Fictiona craft talk for writers, in our new space.

A Better Writer’s Space

CILK119 features a welcoming shared workspace for writers, makers, and small business owners. You’ll look forward to planning meetings and presentations at CILK119, too. Membership to CILK119 includes wifi, a lounge and resource area, printers and paper, and conference and classroom space.

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Resource shelves awaiting a new finish; roomy writers’ space desks awaiting assembly

Oh, and coffee. Not only coffee, but all that ideally goes with it: social gatherings and other special events for members.

Curated Fiction and Nonfiction
Boxes of books, ready mugs, and the ever-vigilant Keurig.
Boxes of books, ready mugs, and the ever-vigilant Keurig.

Fear not, readers! Our curated fiction and nonfiction will come with us!  While we will maintain a monthly rotation of contemporary reading at Meadowlark Toys, most of our collection will come with us to the new location, along with our writer’s resources.  Browse in our new lounge area and enjoy a courtesy discount of 10% off to nonmembers, 20% off to members on books and other resources.

What is “curated” fiction and nonfiction, you may ask?  In short, a quality collection of books in print that includes the best of the bestsellers along with memorable modern classics and graphic novels.  It’s basically stuff we like. (And if you can convince us that you have well-considered curative advice to offer, we’ll order the stuff you like, too.)

Launch and Sneak Preview

We will launch with a series of lectures and workshops for creative startups in October, 2014.

Don’t forget our September 18 sneak peek! Please join us for How Life Becomes Fictiona special event for writers featuring author Joanna Clapps Herman.

In the works: a maker space for inventors and engineers, and a classroom/conference space for teachers and collaborators.
In the works: a maker space for inventors and engineers, and a classroom/conference space for teachers and collaborators.
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Events for Late Summer 2014

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Writers’ Salon
6:45-8:45 PM
FREE

Join us for Thursday evening inspiration– we’ll share a writing prompt and refreshments at Cuppa Pulp Booksellers. Please register via email to info@cuppapulp.com, as space is limited.  Hope to see you there!

 

 


 

WORKSHOP IN THE WOODS THURSDAY august 21

Still 'round the corner there may wait...
Still ’round the corner there may wait…

Writing Workshop
7:00-9:00pm
$35

Join us for a cross-genre workshop at Cuppa Pulp Writer’s Space in Chestnut Ridge. Poetry and prose are welcome in this small-group experience for sharing and comment on works-in-progress. Hosted and led by member Donna Miele, MFA in fiction, co-led by Anupama Amaran, founder of Seranam Literary Arts and poetry reviewer for Numéro Cinq Magazine.

Participants will submit a short selection by June 12 (prose: 20 pages, poetry: 3 poems maximum) to be distributed to the workshop group. Pay on the night of the workshop. All proceeds go to Seranam Literary Arts to build and enhance the local writing community.

See a profile of our new partnership with Seranam Literary Arts here!


 

JOANNA CLAPPS HERMAN THURSDAY SEPTEMBER 18

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“How Fact Becomes Fiction”
Craft Talk, 7:00-9:00pm
$25 includes 1 copy of No Longer and Not Yet
Author and Manhattanville College MFA professor Joanna Clapps Herman presents a special talk for writers. Ms. Herman has published both fiction and nonfiction creatively exploring the day-to-day lives of families and communities.

Please email us or pay via Paypal at our Store page.

 

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Cuppa Pulp Writer’s Space and Seranam Literary Arts

May 28, 2014 Cuppa Pulp owner and manager Donna Miele got her MFA this month–and then this happened…

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After a friendly writing session hosted by Nyack writer Anu Amaran, Donna and Anu talked about dreams for a Rockland literary community. Anu is a poet, and Donna is a fiction writer. Anu had built some momentum around salons and free-write gatherings, and Donna had similarly hosted a few writing events. Both writers agreed that working alone was not the best situation, and recalled good experiences with cross-genre workshops. It seemed like a perfect occasion for a poet and a fiction writer to team up.

See our Calendar or News and Events pages for information on upcoming offerings. All fees to events hosted at Cuppa Pulp go to Seranam Literary Arts to build and enhance the local writing community. 

Introducing Seranam Literary Arts

Indian-American poet & translator Anu Amaran is a graduate of the MFA in Writing program at Vermont College of Fine Arts, and founder of Seranam Literary Arts. Her poetry has appeared in Fourteen Hills, Monkeybicycle, The Bitter Oleander, decomP magazinE, Bayou Magazine, ellipsis, CutBank, Green Hills Literary Lantern, St. Ann’s Review, Diverse Voices Quarterly, The Tulane Review, The Alembic, Permafrost Magazine, and other publications. Find essays, reviews, translations, and more poems at Numéro Cinq Magazine, where she is a contributing writer. Check out her recent profile in Nyack News and Views’ Local Arts Index

She says of her hopes for Seranam, “I dream that one day we will publish a literary journal and offer workshop collaborations with veterans’/youth/seniors organizations, but all that will come in its own time! Seranam Literary Arts is a new organization dedicated to promoting literary creativity through writers’ workshops, literary & art events, readings, and salon evenings in and around the Hudson River village of Nyack, New York.”

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Events for Spring/Summer 2014

Julia Graves promoJulia Graves Wednesday May 16

Author of The Language of Plants
Reading and Signing

6:30 pm, free admission
“It is only in the age of technology that human beings have lost the sense that nature is alive. Throughout history, people spoke to nature, and nature communicated with them… The Language of Plants covers all aspects of the doctrine of signatures in an easily accessible format, so that everyone, whether nature lovers or healers, can learn to read the language of plants in connection with healing.”

 

 

 


James King at Cuppa Pulp Book Club Friday June 20

7:00 pm, free admission.
Author James King joins us to discuss his novel, Bill Warrington’s Last Chance. Limited to 12 participants who have read or begun to read the novel. Books are available for purchase, but purchase is not required. Please register at info@cuppapulp.com.

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Workshop in the Woods Thursday June 19

Still 'round the corner there may wait...
Still ’round the corner there may wait…

Writing Workshop
7:00-9:00pm
$35

Join us for a cross-genre workshop at Cuppa Pulp Writer’s Space in Chestnut Ridge. Poetry and prose are welcome in this small-group experience for sharing and comment on works-in-progress. Hosted and led by member Donna Miele, MFA in fiction, co-led by Anupama Amaran, founder of Seranam Literary Arts and poetry reviewer for Numéro Cinq Magazine.

Participants will submit a short selection by June 12 (prose: 20 pages, poetry: 3 poems maximum) to be distributed to the workshop group.

See a profile of our new partnership with Seranam Literary Arts here!


 

Joanna Clapps Herman Thursday September 18

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“How Fact Becomes Fiction”
Craft Talk, 7:00-9:00pm
$25 includes 1 copy of No Longer and Not Yet
Author and Manhattanville College MFA professor Joanna Clapps Herman presents a special talk for writers. Ms. Herman has published both fiction and nonfiction creatively exploring the day-to-day lives of families and communities.

Please email us or pay via Paypal at our Store page.

 

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The Beautiful Urban Family of the Upper West Side

no-longer-and-not-yet**Attention Writers! Joanna Clapps Herman leads “How Life Becomes Fiction,” a craft talk, on Thursday, September 18. Details on our News and Events page.**

No Longer and Not Yet, by Joanna Clapps Herman, offers linked short stories about the city is at its best. The book teems with unique souls that somehow, serendipitously, come together in community, spin apart, find one another again. The Upper West Side is a world full of possibility in this collection, and Ms. Herman shows us how its denizens’ intimacies and adventures, their devotion to one another and to the place they call home, render the city not such a large place after all.

Unlike a lot of urban writers portraying individuals as the city’s central characters, Herman makes families New York’s foundation. Individuals often seek out the city in order to assert themselves, their capacity for making unique choices. Herman’s families build urban lives to reveal that while strong individuals remain unique, they are willing to limit individual freedoms for the sake of loving relationship. In the book’s central series of stories, Tess and Max fall in love, marry, and raise their son Paul to the brink of high school graduation, with sweetly understated drama.

The first of the collection’s title sequence of stories, “No Longer,” has Tess proposing to Max. “All her life Tess had been waiting for fate to arrive on winged feet with a whir and a portentous breeze placing before her what her life would be about… Was Max her winged fate or a disturbance in the weather? Tess wasn’t sure. She knew she could not let the winds blow past her this time.” In the second, “Not Yet,” Tess considers leaving Max, who refuses to father another child after the failure of his first marriage. But when he confesses that he cannot bear losing her, and decides another child will be worth it if she will only stay, Tess meets him with uncertainty.

“Oh Max, we haven’t figured out how to be married. How can we have a baby?

“Oh, we’ll make a mess. I promise. The kid will wonder how we ever had the nerve to think we could be parents. My daughter will explain what a bad deal it’s getting. She’ll write a song about it. It will be broadcast on the radio.”

…Tess considered this, considered the currents of her husband’s weather flowing over her.

Not every family in No Longer Not Yet falls into Tess and Max’s more or less traditional patterns. Naomi, an artist, has a child with Eliot, then grows into a strong single mother. David and Sophie, immersed in intriguing professional lives, wrestle with whether to have children at all. Leah and Aaron navigate precarious parenting waters as their troubled preteen daughter appears to reject her new baby brother. Ambitious, brilliant Esther juggles marital infidelity, motherhood, weight issues, and chronic quitter’s syndrome during years of psychotherapy, in “Taking an Incomplete,” the collection’s most volatile story. In Esther, the struggle of the individual within the family bubbles closest to the surface, threatens to explode the family’s carefully tended order.

Herman touches on a universal nerve by setting these stories in the city, where individuality crosses into psychosis in characters like the homeless Flower Lady and the cardboard-box hermit, tended to by Leah in “Seeding Memory” and “Snow Struck.” The family hovers in the balance between the individual’s desires for normalcy and uniqueness. As we step into maturity and head up families of our own, we often feel as if we are navigating those extremes exclusively: immerse ourselves in family and lose our individuality, reject the confines of family and lose our minds.

The families in No Longer Not Yet teeter as they walk that balance, but they do not fall. This is not a collection that explores disaster or abysmal loss. If anything, Herman explores the truths of what we perceive as urban success, normalcy, and individuality in a world where long-term relationship, the touchstone of humanity, is often hidden behind the heroic myths portrayed in news and popular media. No Longer Not Yet reveals the city as an unsensational, even sensible place, where families do what they do everywhere. Schedule work and play, juggle the nuts-and-bolts of daily life, and work hardest at feeding the love that brought them together in the first place.

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Meet Elizabeth Eslami!

ESLAMI_-_HIBERNATE_COVER_JPGWe are beyond thrilled to announce the launch of Elizabeth Eslami’s short story collection, Hibernate, winner of the Ohio State University Press Prize in Short Fiction, right here at Cuppa Pulp Booksellers this April!

Elizabeth’s debut novel was the lovely Bone Worship, about an Iranian-American college dropout walking the line between two ethnic worlds while she tries not to fail out of life altogether. Elizabeth is not only a remarkable writer, but a much-loved teacher in the MFA Program at Manhattanville College. The Program will also host Elizabeth in New York City with a special reading to honor Hibernate.

She shared with us some insight to her work, her life, and the difficulties of supporting a dog on a writer’s paycheck.

Liz, we loved the way that Bone Worship portrayed the second-generation American experience. Will we see more of that in Hibernate? What else can you tell us about the new collection?
Hibernate is a collection of eleven stories, set everywhere from Montana to Los Angeles to Tehran and beyond, populated by people whose lives have been profoundly, irrevocably disrupted, forcing them to navigate substantial obstacles. Sometimes those obstacles have a more literal stopping power, like a ship wedged in a frozen sea, or someone being born into a certain kind of life, or not having money, or encountering a stranger who talks himself into being trusted. Other times, the obstacle is seven layers deep: the desire to meet a nebulous standard of beauty, or the pull we sometimes feel toward self-destruction as an end to boredom.

The characters and the places in these stories are all over the geographical and psychological map, yet you meet them on the same uneven terrain. They’re all going to make a move, you know that much. Whether that move is going to bring them to destruction or salvation or some more treacherous between-land is what you’ll want to know.

So, more world-straddling heroes! Sounds delicious. Why a story collection, after the success of the novel?
Because writing a novel is hard! As you well know. I’ve always loved story collections, and I always imagined writing one, even back when I was writing Bone Worship. Most of us cut our teeth, certainly in grad school anyway, on short stories, kind of like dissecting a frog before you try your hand at a cadaver. (That’s neither a dig at frogs nor at stories, by the way. I love both of them!) I feel like you can get closer to perfect with a story in a way that’s nearly impossible with a novel.

The other thing that’s fun with a story collection is that you get to try a little of everything – tonally, stylistically. If you screw up with one, maybe you get it right with the next one. Stories are such an intense immersive experience. It always makes me laugh when people say that stories are gaining popularity because they’re designed for the short attention span. You can’t afford to zone out with a short story! What, you’re gonna grab a sandwich while Arnold Friend is teetering on the porch steps? Please.

Sometimes a short story is so intense, like really good poetry, that I actually do have to take a break between sections of a single story. I had that experience reading Every Good Woman Has An Ax–and after I finished, I took a break and then read it again. What a pleasure! What are some of your favorite stories, and what are you writing next?
My students get sick of me talking about it, but Sherwood Anderson’s “Death in the Woods” is my gold standard. Lawrence Sargent Hall’s “The Ledge.” “Majorette” by Lauren Groff. Ben Percy’s “Winter’s Trappings.” “People Like That Are The Only People Here.” Everything from Turgenev’s Sketches from a Hunter’s Album. Flannery O’Connor and Alistair MacLeod and Pam Houston and Alice Munro and Danielle Evans. I’ve taught Aimee Bender’s “Ironhead” and “Ysrael” by Junot Diaz dozens of times, and each time they yield something new. I loved “The Diggings” from Claire Vaye Watkins’s Battleborn.

Every Good Woman Has An Ax, which you read in the Manhattanville Review, is actually an excerpt from a novel by the same name, which I am currently writing. Okay, actually, I’m lying to you, because right this second, I’m writing a short story. (Told you I love frogs.)

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Last but not least, for all the struggling writers out there, we all want to know about your transition to professional status. Is it true that you are able to support a dog with your writing? How’d you get there? 😉
You’d have to define “struggling” vs. “professional” for me. If professional means “published,” okay. But I always feel like I’m struggling. I always want the writing to be stronger, to take less time to get there, to be published in better magazines, to get more reviews, better reviews. To be noticed by critics and readers, which is weird for a shy person but goes with the territory. I think the struggling part is permanently necessary. To be hungry and active and never truly satisfied. But if we’re talking about money, the answer is easy.

No, I cannot support my dog with only my writing. Teaching helps with that, having a husband who teaches helps with that. Denali is twelve now, our little old pointy-headed lady, so it’s a world of arthritis and hypothyroidism and vet visits. Everybody thinks it’s funny that I include her in my acknowledgements, but she’s the key to my writing. Never judges, is fully disciplined, in her dog bed next to the desk before I’m in the chair. She rode around in the back of a Toyota Corolla all over the Pacific Northwest for the first book tour. Every event, I have a memory of looking back, seeing her pointy head staring between the head rests. I told her I’d be back. I was off to earn her Pupperonis.

 

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Events for Winter/Spring 2014

2014-2-7 soup nightThe excitement is lining up, folks!

February 14 Soup Night POSTPONED to February 28
Coop Night! Sponsored by Hungry Hollow Coop
Co-op members, join us for extended hours and get $5 off every purchase of $25 or more! Free refreshments for all.

March 15 Meet Author Craig Holdrege
7:30 pm, The Living Room at Sunbridge College, 285 Hungry Hollow Rd., Chestnut Ridge NY.

Hungry Hollow Co-op brings the Director of the Nature Institute to our town for a presentation and signing of his book on human-plant interaction, Thinking Like a Plant. Pre-purchase the book and get free admission with your receipt from Meadowlark Toys/Cuppa Pulp Booksellers! $10 General admission, $8 to Co-op Members, Seniors, and Students. Books will also be available for purchase at the event.

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April 5 Book Launch for Hibernate, by Elizabeth Eslami
6pm Reception, Reading and Signing 7pm
Join us in congratulating Elizabeth Eslami on the publication of her new short story collection, winner of the Ohio State University Prize in Short Fiction! Free Admission.

 

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Winter Bestsellers

The season brings us one of the year’s most anticipated books, The Goldfinch, by Donna Tartt. We’re also pleased to feature A Field Guide to Lucid Dreaming, graphic novel The Reason for Dragons, and nonfiction collection The Moth. 

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Have You Hugged Your Bookseller Today?

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January –, 2014 The biggest news at Cuppa Pulp is that, after several months of neglect, we’ve updated the feature posts to review The Last Policeman novels, and to introduce guest blogger Jeffrey Shaffer. Jeffrey is a Portland, Oregon bookseller, and married to children’s book author Susan Blackaby (Brownie Groundhog and the Wintry Surprise). We’ve been enjoying his personal reflections on book selling, and hope you will too!

Writers interested in guest-posting here about reading or writing may message us on Facebook (as Jeffrey did) or email us at info@cuppapulp.com

We also hope to check in with more news for readers and writers in the weeks to come… but for now we’re sliding by on the assumption that writers are all busy fulfilling their new years’ resolutions to write more, and readers are taking a break to watch the new season of Downton Abbey (and re-watch old episodes in between).

Have You Hugged Your Bookseller Today?

A COLUMN BY JEFFREY SHAFFER

A consequence of working at Annie Bloom’s is that I’ve developed two personalities. BookLover Jeff is gregarious, always happy to start open-ended conversations with customers, and sometimes has trouble knowing when it’s time to shut up. BookSeller Jeff is pragmatic, maintains an awareness of what’s happening in every aisle, and is always careful not to do anything that might degrade the reputation of the store. The tug of war between these two determined personas is ongoing, even when I’m relaxing at home.

For example, not long ago I was drinking my morning coffee while staring out the kitchen window and saw something truly wonderful. A young man was strolling along the sidewalk staring intently at an object in his hands. I assumed he was holding some type of web-accessing device but no–he was READING A BOOK.

The voice of BookLover Jeff immediately spoke up inside my head. “That person should be congratulated!” he said.  “Too many people these days are becoming slaves to their electronic communication gadgets. You need to run after that guy and let him know he’s doing a great thing. Give him a big bear hug and say, ‘I officially declare you to be a reading rock star! You’re my new BFF! Keep turning those pages!’  Go tell him. Now!!”

It was very tempting. I do believe that reading should be encouraged at every possible opportunity. But in this case there was a major complication:  I was wearing only a terrycloth bathrobe.  Before I had time to make a move toward the front door BookSeller Jeff stepped in with some cautionary advice.

“Don’t even think about it,” he warned.  “Stay right here and finish your coffee.”

“I feel bad just letting that guy walk away,” I said.  “What harm could come from complimenting someone for reading a book? And I could also tell him I work in a bookstore, so he understands why I’m so thrilled.”

The reply was immediate.  “Have you never heard about The Law of Unintended Consequences?”  Sometimes BookSeller Jeff can be a bit sarcastic. “Look at this from a more objective viewpoint. What is that guy on the sidewalk going to think when he sees you, a total stranger, charging toward him in your bathrobe? It’s also highly likely that during the chase your waistband will come untied and give the entire encounter an X-rating.”

BookLover Jeff felt the wind going out of his sails. “Okay,” he offered, “so how about we just forget the bear hug and give the guy a high-five?”

“Good idea,” I said.  “What’s wrong with that? ”

“Pretty much everything,” BookSeller Jeff shot back. “Consider the bigger picture. Suppose the incident goes viral. Word gets around that a man reading a book caused a scantily clad homeowner to come running out of his house and give chase. It’s the kind of story that makes people not want to carry books around in public places. Then they find out where you work—that could cause consumers everywhere to be nervous about even shopping for books, so then bookstores all over America start going belly-up, and suddenly the entire publishing industry is reeling. Do you want all that on your conscience? That you wrecked the book business with one impulsive act of affection that went tragically haywire?”

By this time the sidewalk reader had disappeared around the corner at the end of the block. “Well, he’s gone but not forgotten,” I said.

“Maybe he’ll come back someday,” BookLover Jeff added hopefully.

“Maybe he’ll walk into your store one day and become a regular customer,” BookSeller Jeff suggested.

“That would be great,” I agreed. “And now that you mention it, I sometimes give hugs to regular customers.  How come you’ve never had a problem with that?”

“Because the store is a controlled environment that provides a literary context for the hug,” BookSeller Jeff patiently explained.  “And, in some instinctive way, you have always been careful to observe the two crucial rules about spontaneous hugging, the first of which is to let the customer make the first move so you know the mood is receptive.”

“And what’s the second rule?” I wondered.

“Be absolutely, positively certain,” BookSeller Jeff concluded, “that all of the participants are fully clothed.”

Jeffrey Shaffer is a bookseller and booklover at Annie Bloom’s Books in the historic Multnomah Village district of southwest Portland. His relationship with Annie Bloom’s began in the 1990′s when the store’s booksellers enthusiastically sold his two humor collections I’m Right Here, Fish-Cake and It Came With the House. He continues to blog about politics and popular culture for Huffington Post and also contributes to the ‘Modern Parent’ blog at the Christian Science Monitor.

This blog post originally appeared here, and was republished with the author’s permission.

 

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Love The Last Policeman!

DETECTIVE PALACE VERSUS ASTEROID MAIA
Ben H. Winters’ Award-Winning Last Policeman Novels

Congratulations to Ben H. Winters on the recent nomination of Countdown City, the second novel in the Last Policeman trilogy, for this year’s Philip K. Dick Award for science fiction! Last year, the first novel in the series won an Edgar for best original paperback in mystery and crime fiction. Both honors seem delightful to us, bright spots in a literary world where awards often go to novels that may be epic, meticulously crafted, relevant, or even stupefying, but not always… fun.

The Last Policeman books, so far, are fun!

As The Last Policeman opens in March, Detective Hank Palace is a cop’s cop, one of those rare men who rises each morning knowing exactly why he’s here. That virtue, however, is about to become irrelevant. Maia, a massive asteroid formerly known as 2011GV(sub 1), is predicted, with 100% certainty according to the mews media, to collide with Earth in October. Maia will probably not strike Hank’s home of Concord, New Hampshire dead-on, but her impact is predicted to eradicate life on earth as we know it. With 100% certainty. According to the news media.

Hank, like others around him, takes in this news with grave dismay as he is faced with yet another suicide investigation. But when he sees signs that foul play might have taken the life of Peter Zell, Hank never considers abandoning his job. Instead of rubber-stamping the file, he begins to ask questions. The answers, told over the course of a lively and tense story that’s peppered with wry humor, begin to reveal the rapid breakdown of human civilization in the growing shadow of Maia. What are the limits of human morality, and for what reasons will people resolve to break them?

In the background of the murder investigation, we learn that Hank has a sister, Nico. The two are bound by a tragic family history, driven apart by disparate natures. Nico is younger, quick and intuition-driven, while Hank is deliberate and circumspect. Nico has stepped to the fringes, along with a radical group that believes the Maia story is part of a government conspiracy. The asteroid’s path has been mischaracterized, or can be deflected. Hank rejects the movement–but what if they’re right?

As Countdown City opens, it is July. Maia’s impact is predicted to be less than 3 months away (yes, with 100% certainty). Greater questions arise. What are the limits of human fidelity, faith, and relationship, as civilization recedes into feudal mistrust? The formerly sophisticated global marketplace collapses into local bartering circles. The network of human labor abandons its posts on the power and technology grids. Small, tight communities war with each other for water, food and security. Nico’s faction, for instance, fashions itself as a scouting arm for the Free Republic, a group of students occupying the former University of New Hampshire campus. An escape community called The World of Tomorrow advertises its luxury mountain stronghold to frightened people of means.

The suicide trend has not abated, and Hank is faced with another disappearance. Was Brett Cavatone, ex-cop and devoted husband to Hank’s childhood friend Martha, a victim of foul play, or has he simply “gone bucket-list,” along with the millions of others who have run away to formerly forbidden loves, pleasures, missions, false promises of salvation?

Winters, who earned acclaim for the his spoof-classics Android Karenina and Sense and Sensibility and Sea Monsters, writes solid, entertaining crime fiction, infused with his own quirky perspective on the world. Hank Palace is a decent guy, a maddeningly dogged detective, the kind of hero that takes the case of a little boy’s missing toy sword as seriously as the case of a man gone bucket-list. He’s also human enough to fall in love, once or twice, and to maintain a fierce devotion to his only sister, despite the abysmal differences that drive them apart. And he’s unable to do less than his best, even when that is completely, humanly inadequate to prevent the end of the world. What more could anyone ask of a person?

Pick up both paperback originals for a satisfying pre-apocalyptic read, and join us in eagerly awaiting the final installment, World of Trouble, rumored for a summer release!

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Fall for Giants

Fall in the North Atlantic U.S. is the perfect time and place to read Life Among Giants by Bill Roorbach–over a long weekend, or a chapter at a time as the days shorten and the early evenings chase you to bed. This easy-paced yet structurally complex novel is laced with just enough bittersweet regret to perfectly complement the turning leaves. There’s plenty of action and intrigue here for thriller fans, yet also a thoughtful set of intertwining character journeys through relationship, football, haute cuisine, dance, 1970s nostalgia, (and yes, even some surprisingly decent sex) that will appeal to the more literary-leaning.

David “Lizard” Hochmeyer is a charming Princeton-bound high school football player who seems to have it all: golden good looks, devoted power-set parents, and a ticket to the Ivy League. He shares a pond in his Connecticut backyard with rock star Dabney Stryker-Stewart and his enchanting wife, the world-famous ballet dancer Sylphide.  His fiery sister, Kate, is both goddess and puzzle to him. When Lizard’s parents are murdered under suspicious circumstances, he and Kate experience a seismic shift that will drive them to seek answers for the rest of their lives. Roorbach weaves together decades’ worth of these larger-than-life personalities to uncover the secrets and foibles that might shed light on the double murder.

Lizard shares his love for good and wholesome food, down and dirty football, and brilliant, artistic women throughout with a charm that belies the trouble and grief driving his life. On occasion the ease with which he and his fellow characters fall into fame and prestigious positions comes across as unbelievable. Lizard follows up his tenure as a third-string quarterback for the Miami Dolphins in their heyday, for instance, with not one but two acclaimed gourmet restaurants, though his only training at cooking came from a long-term Southern girlfriend who taught him decent barbecue. His true love, Emily, rises to immediate fame as an international dance star under Sylphide’s tutelage–while Lizard gets his intimate turn, over the years, with both fabulous women.

But in portraying these lives in the spectacular way he does, Roorbach wisely taps into our delight with romantic and ambitious fantasy. He does it skillfully, too, engaging modern readers with modern issues and modern-seeming characters inhabiting a pop culture world of the past. He opts for a multi-cultural, multi-sexual, and even cross-gender cast of characters, keeping the dialogue highly entertaining as well as relevant in our world of ever-brightening awareness to global human issues, from gender consciousness to bad banks to Lizard’s foodie obsession with mushrooms.

Life Among Giants is a sprawling, fun, and rich novel, deserving of the praise it received on its release from both the New York Times and The Washington Post. Just like the season of fall–all this, and football too.

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Fall Bestsellers

We’re honoring National Reading Group Month with our Fall suggestions, including the paperback release of The Round House by Louise Erdrich, Life Among Giants by Bill Roorbach, which we’ll also review in the days to come, The Maid’s Version by Daniel Woodrell, and The Lady and the Peacock by Peter Popham, a new biography of Aung San Suu Kyi.

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Reading Group Selections
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Author Events!

Suddenly, Fall 2013 brings a lovely harvest of authors to Cuppa Pulp! Please join us on Saturday, October 12, 2013 at the Green Meadow Waldorf School Fall Fair for signings with local authors. Green Meadow Waldorf School is located at 307 Hungry Hollow Road, Chestnut Ridge, New York. Fair hours are 10am-5pm.

11 am: Emmy Laybourne (Monument 14: Sky On Fire)

12 pm: Andrew Shurtleff (Leaning on Cedars)

1 pm: Green Meadow Waldorf School high school teachers John Wulsin (The Spirit of the English Language) and Harlan Gilbert (At the Source: The Incarnation of the Child and the Development of a Modern Pedagogy)

2 pm: Heather Spergel (How Many Feet in the Bed? and Free to Be… Gluten Free!)

NOTE: Schedule is subject to change. Check in with us on the day of the fair for the final schedule!

Emmy Laybourne, Andrew Shurtleff, John Wulsin, Harlan Gilbert, and Heather Spergel
Emmy Laybourne, Andrew Shurtleff, John Wulsin, Harlan Gilbert, and Heather Spergel

On Saturday, October 26, 2013, we welcome romance author Elf Ahearn to Cuppa Pulp for a reading and signing of her new novel, A Rogue in Sheep’s Clothing. Refreshments will be served.

Meet Elf Ahearn
Meet Elf Ahearn
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Writing News and Part 5 of Advice on First Drafts

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October 4, 2013
First off, THANK YOU to Team Cuppa Pulp writers and sponsors for supporting the New York Writers Coalition on September 22 for the 8th annual Write-a-Thon! You raised over $1200 through Team Cuppa Pulp, and we even got a special commendation at the event as one of the top three fundraisers. Overall, the event brought in $14,000+ to help fund workshops for writers on the fringes who have something to say. Every community has these voices in their midst. How much richer might our history become, as well as our literature, if we could better preserve those voices!

The Great Link of the Week is one that’s been officially around since August. Check out Narrative4, an initiative headed up by authors Colum McCann and Luis Alberto Urrea that seeks to build empathy among young people from all over the world through story: a “United Nations of decency,” as McCann says. For 5 bucks, you get 100+ wildly different stories on the theme of “How to Be a Man,” and you help this initiative to build momentum. Or you can click over to their Blog for FREE to watch Sting (swoon) sing part of a musical he’s writing about his Newcastle shipbuilding forbears.

Last but not least, here’s some writing inspiration from Jenny Milchman, whose first novel, Cover of Snow, was published last year to critical and commercial enthusiasm after nearly twelve years of drafting and redrafting. Not only is Jenny a model of perseverance (and her work a model of craft), but we want to thank her for her enthusiasm in encouraging the Writer’s Space here at Cuppa Pulp. We look forward to Jenny having an event with us when her second novel hits the shelves in Spring 2014.

Post script, speaking of events. We will welcome romance author Elf Ahearn to Cuppa Pulp on Saturday, October 26 for a reading and signing of her new novel, A Rogue in Sheep’s Clothing. We will provide refreshments; BYOB (that’s Bring Your Own Bodice).

Writing Advice: First Drafts, Part 5

Begin Again

Donna Lee Miele

Almost from the moment you begin, you find thoughts of revision irresistible. But this can staunch your creative flow. Instead, build a plan for revision into your first draft process. It might be a long trip, so plan to enjoy the journey.

“I’m happy to do as many drafts as any story I commit to needs,” says Joanna Clapps Herman. “That could be ten or it could be a hundred… I don’t care. I’m on the road with my work, and I love being on the road.”

Joanna’s forty-year career has involved writing poetry, fiction, and nonfiction for numerous journals and presses, and teaching creative writing at every level. She is on the MFA faculty at Manhattanville College, and teaches creative writing at the City College of New York’s Center for Worker Education. She knows how to work hard and fast, when necessary.

But her recent memoir, The Anarchist Bastard, took years to write. “My husband would urge me to turn my attention to writing about my Italian family and I would look at him in confusion,” she writes in the Introduction. “But I was still so utterly of them, a part of them, that I had no words to bring to my pages about them. You can’t write about that which is so much a part of yourself that you can’t step back from it, consider it, think about it… It took the larger part of twenty years to be able to fully unloosen my word hoard against this wordlessness.”

Joanna took her time delving into her family’s sometimes painful secrets and tunneling through a wealth of social, historical, and literary research. Armed with plenty of facts and knowledge, she brought good and bad truths to light, and transfigured the day-to-day of family into a cultural portrait. Not quite like pulling story out of thin air, perhaps—more like spinning straw into gold.

But the craft process was much the same. A successful writing life had taught Joanna to enjoy every stage—even when revision requires a hundred drafts.

“I no longer have the need to drive to the end,” she says. “I love the last stage of the process… Making sure I have a sound architecture, making sure the characters’ concerns are really clear.”

For Joanna, revision begins during the first draft. While staying with the initial flow, she tracks her own inner dialogue with a new “grocery list” of questions and suggestions for herself. She keeps the list aside until she is ready to think about the second draft. “I always keep a writer’s journal—what is going on in my writing life, what is going on with a specific piece, what my struggles are, what isn’t working, just to clarify it to myself.

“I trust each stage to do its work.”

The Authors’ Extra Mojo:

For many of us, a “polished” first draft is not only impossible, but undesirable. Anne Lamott writes, “There may be something in the very last line of the very last paragraph of page six that you jut love, that is so beautiful or wild that you now know what you’re supposed to be writing about, more or less, or in what direction you might go—but there was no way to get to this without first getting through the first five and a half pages.”

Revision is “when the writing craft comes in,” says Emmy Laybourne. She plans on multiple passes dedicated to different aspects, until “everything’s sparking and moving:” overall story movement, scene progression, character consistency. But not in the first draft.

While writing his second novel, James King planned a revision process involving rewrites of entire chapters or sections, but he still set it aside completely. “The first draft gave me a chance to meet and get to know the main characters and to experiment.”

Max Ellendale is more scene-oriented. She knew she’d be “rewriting scenes over and over until they’re gut-wrenching or disturbing in a way that sticks.” But not during the first draft.

Lauren Groff’s first round of revision consists of typing up a single draft from the multiple longhand drafts she completed while nailing down the elements of her story. “It’s a very long process, but it’s shorter than if I were to be attached to the sentences… For me, writing is all about finding the way to tell a story, and making sure that the way you tell a story is absolutely right for the story you’re trying to tell.”

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Come back to the story you first envisioned. Do you recognize it? Or has it transformed—or become disfigured? Do you still want it to live? Prepare to begin again.

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Draw story from beyond the page. Exercise discipline. Engage a positive inner dialogue. Be unstoppable. And begin again.

You may check your blueprint at every stage. Or you may rely only on a grocery list, or a funny little talisman that grants you excellent insight. But do devise your own practices, because your muse doesn’t communicate in sentences. That’s your job—to conjure story.

Coming Next Time: Dreaming a Workshop, Part 1

References: 

Except where noted below, quoted material from James King (Bill Warrington’s Last Chance, New York: Viking, 2010), Emmy Laybourne (Monument 14: Sky on Fire, New York: Feiwel and Friends, 2013), Max Ellendale (Glyph, Breathless Press, 2012), and Joanna Clapps Herman (The Anarchist Bastard: Growing Up Italian in America, Albany: State University of New York Press, 2011) are from personal interviews and emails with the author, March-June, 2012.

Quoted material from Lauren Groff (Arcadia, New York: Voice, 2012) is from the author’s transcript of Ms. Groff’s seminar at the New York Writer’s Institute, State University of New York at Albany, March 27, 2012. “Lauren Groff on Writing and Arcadia”

Herman, The Anarchist Bastard, pages 3-4.

Anne LaMott, Bird by Bird, New York, Random House, 1995, page 23.

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Team Cuppa Pulp to Support New York Writers Coalition

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September 19, 2013–Write-a-thon in two days!

Why did you never tell me?

How often we say this to our children, our parents, our friends and loved ones, when an accidental conversation reveals a long-ago honor, trauma, adventure, or secret. How your grandfather escaped the enemy in World War 2. How your daughter got rejected by a friend or a crush. How the apple-cheeked checkout boy’s family moved here when his family got displaced by a hurricane.

Why did you never tell me?

The answer is often along the lines of, Everyone went through the same thing at that time. Or I was too ashamed. Or even, Who would want to hear about that?

Some writers served by the New York Writers Coalition will grow into artists. Some will just learn that their words matter. Your donation also supports the teachers for the Writers Coalition, who serve disadvantaged students, the elderly, the incarcerated, the ill.

Along with my team, I’ll be devoting 8 hours to the NY Writers Coalition, doing something I’m good at, and incidentally, setting down a story that I imagine a displaced family would have told during World War 2 in the Philippines. I would love to write in honor of your donation!

My team’s donation page is here. Any contribution is gratefully welcomed.

Thank you!

Warmly yours,

Donna Miele

It is difficult
     to get the news from poems,
       yet men die miserably every day
           for lack
of what is found there.

-William Carlos Williams, Asphodel, That Greeny Flower

September 10, 2013–A plea to support underprivileged voices from Cuppa Pulp proprietress Donna Miele:

Dear Cuppa Pulp Readers and Writers,

The NYWC sent me a post card recently, challenging me to Write My A** Off on Saturday, September 21 in a 10-6 write-a-thon to support writing programs for the underprivileged. I read about the write-a-thon here, and also checked out the NYWC’s mission statement and staff profiles. There’s really very little to quibble with. They’re just a decent group of people doing some worthy work, and they need some committed writers to promote their cause.

I could not really say no, since the event coincides with a deadline I set myself to finish a major revision of the novel I’m working on. So I registered, and also posted a team: Team Cuppa Pulp!

Team Cuppa Pulp now needs sponsors. Have you read and been inspired by poetry, articles, stories, and novels by authors with unexpected or new voices? Are you as excited as I am about helping new voices to receive the support they cannot always afford to pursue? Please consider a contribution to help the NYWC. Any donation would be much appreciated.

Click here to offer a donation either via me or the Team, and consider spreading the word to other readers! If you are a writer, you can also join us, either in NYC at the General Society of Mechanics and Tradesmen Library, 20 West 44th St., NYC, NY; in Rockland (location TBA); or at the writing spot of your choice. Remember to register first! Again, we’ll be writing from 10-6 on September 21.

Thank you in advance for supporting the NYWC through Team Cuppa Pulp!

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September 5, 2013–Best writer’s inspiration this month comes from a video.  Poet Neil Hilborn offered “OCD” as a finalist in the 2013 Rustbelt Poetry Slam, delivering a punch-to-the-gut love story that is also a wrenching portrait of human psychological illness. Do that in 1000 words or less, and you have created living art.

Congratulations to local author Max Ellendale for Glyph’s appearance on Amazon’s Erotic Horror bestseller list!

Last but not least, Team Cuppa Pulp is looking for some bada** writers and generous souls to support us in the 8th Annual NY Writers Coalition Write-a-Thon, benefitting writing programs for the underprivileged. You can read Donna’s plea here. Join us by registering or donating at our FirstGiving page for the Writers Coalition. Writers reach out to sponsors and show up to write from 10-6 on September 21! If we have enough team members, we will have two groups, one at Cuppa Pulp and one in NYC at the General Society of Mechanics and Tradesmen Library,  20 West 44th St., NYC, NY. Thank you in advance for supporting the NYWC through Team Cuppa Pulp!

Writing Advice: First Drafts, Part 4

Be Unstoppable

Donna Lee Miele

Max Ellendale is no stranger to finishing difficult projects. She holds a graduate degree in mental health counseling, completed her MFA in 2013, and has written short stories since the age of 12. The second book in the Glyph series was recently published, and the third is well-underway. But she almost abandoned Glyph in the first year of her MFA program.

“At the time, most people were not clued in to the booming sci-fi/fantasy genre. I felt like an outcast. What I was writing wasn’t good enough, because it wasn’t memoir or literary fiction. It dampened my spirit. ‘What are you writing that for? That has no value.’ I butchered Glyph and changed it to attempt to meet the needs of others, breaking Kurt Vonnegut’s rule of writing fiction: ‘Write to please just one person. If you open a window and make love to the world, so to speak, your story will get pneumonia.’”

The turning point came when, against all her own expectations, Max mastered a “worthwhile” writing assignment: a literary memoir. “I struggled the entire semester because of my ‘sci-fi/fantasy handicap,’” she says. “[And] I tore a nonfiction piece from somewhere inside me. During our final reading, I made people laugh, and sad at the same time. The look on my teacher’s face, and the pat on the back she gave me when I finished, said to me, ‘You can do this, you can write.’”

With the confidence gained from this small success, Max went back to writing what she really enjoyed. She learned to listen critically to critics. A literary critique of genre fiction “is like going to a podiatrist for a dental consult,” she says, “though the flipside is also true. You might learn about metaphor and symbolism from a poet, or you might get some political insight from a blogger. Take what feels right and leave the rest.”

Max also found an audience through online networking. Industry wisdom counsels against putting your drafts on your own website or blog, if your goal is publication in a literary journal or press. Many publishers want work that has never been published before, in any format. But Max had already submitted to numerous agents without success, and felt that it was time to try communicating with readers another way.

“I posted a few tidbits on my blog that started to get some attention. My now-editor read chapters 1 and 2 and contacted me via Facebook. She urged me to submit to the small press that she works for, which publishes in my genre. I was able to find value in my work.”

The Authors’ Extra Mojo:

So does Max celebrate upon finishing a first draft? “I celebrate by moving on to the next project,” she says.

For most writers, the “next project” is revision.

James King does not celebrate either. “I get started as quickly as possible on the second draft,” he says.

Emmy Laybourne takes a time out—sort of. “When I get to the end of a first draft, I type ‘The End,’ and then I lie down on the floor and go to sleep! That’s happened twice, now. I get to take a nap, in the middle of the day.”

Stephen King recommends stepping away from a piece completely, for longer than one afternoon. “My advice to you is that you take a couple of days off—go fishing, go kayaking, do a jigsaw puzzle—and then work on something else. Something shorter, preferably… you’re not ready to go back to the old project until you’ve gotten so involved in a new one (or re-involved in your day-to-day life) that you’ve almost forgotten the unreal estate that took up three hours of every morning or afternoon for a period of three or five or seven months.”

If you’re not a strict outliner, you’ll know you’re done with a first draft when “you feel you’ve done what you set out to do, or you’ve come as close as you are capable,” says Joanna Clapps Herman. “By the time I’ve gone down my initial ‘grocery list’ and said what I have to say about each item I have a rough first draft, and I know more or less what work is ahead of me to write this piece fully.”

Joanna, who has experienced the full spectrum of the writing process many times, understands that when you finish your first draft, you are really just beginning. Now is the time to call on craft—“All the stuff that everyone works so hard to learn, and that is so well outlined in so many how-to books,” Joanna says. Your work has found its voice, but that is intermediary, at best, to a complete book. You must enflesh your story’s bones. You’re about to start all over again.

Coming Next Time: Part 5, Begin Again

References: 

Except where noted below, quoted material from James King (Bill Warrington’s Last Chance, New York: Viking, 2010), Emmy Laybourne (Monument 14: Sky on Fire, New York: Feiwel and Friends, 2013), Max Ellendale (Glyph, Breathless Press, 2012), and Joanna Clapps Herman (The Anarchist Bastard: Growing Up Italian in America, Albany: State University of New York Press, 2011) are from personal interviews and emails with the author, March-June, 2012.

Quoted material from Lauren Groff (Arcadia, New York: Voice, 2012) is from the author’s transcript of Ms. Groff’s seminar at the New York Writer’s Institute, State University of New York at Albany, March 27, 2012. “Lauren Groff on Writing and Arcadia”

Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft, New York, Simon & Schuster, 2010, pages 211-212.

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Rambling Through “&Sons” by David Gilbert

 

&SonsWade into &Sons, the epic New York novel by David Gilbert, with both eyes open. For one thing, you don’t want to miss a single beautiful turn of phrase, and the characters’ portraits, with the possible exception of young Andy Dyer, who is simply a “likable bastard,” to quote the New York Times, are as close to flawlessly drawn as you will find. For another, it’s easy to lose the story in that lovely language. You have to pay attention. Except for the beauty of Gilbert’s prose, you may wonder why the novel fills over 400 pages. But much of this story, especially the portraits and the masterfully drawn New York tableaux, will stay with you long after you close the book: the mark of a good read.

&Sons, Gilbert’s second novel, revolves around the family of A.N. Dyer, known as Andrew, an aging celebrity novelist who appears modeled after several real-life curmudgeonly, reclusive writers of the last century. Most reviewers recall J.D. Salinger, but Dyer has been significantly more prolific, publishing 16 acclaimed novels spanning 30+ years. We meet Andrew at the funeral of his oldest friend, Charlie Topping, whose son, Philip, tells the tale. Andrew is in his twilight years. Andrew’s obsession, seemingly in response to Charlie’s death, is twofold: recreate the first draft of his seminal first novel, Ampersand, and recreate his family with a desperate call to sons Richard and Jamie for a reunion in New York City.

Andrew’s youngest son, Andy, only seventeen, is the delight of his eyes–and also, unfortunately, the child of an extramarital relationship, painted rather fantastically as the writer’s love affair with himself (the details which are one of the oddest surprises in the novel). Andy’s birth estranged Andrew from his wife and two older children, but it is the loyal Philip who is treated as an outsider, though he grew up alongside the Dyer boys. Philip has struggled all his life to understand why this should be so. In the wake of his father’s death, he pores over Andrew and Charlie’s lifelong mysterious and intimate correspondence, which seems to hold the key.

&Sons has been characterized by New York author Fran Lebowitz as “a New York novel written by an actual New Yorker.” If you add to this that Gilbert is a repeat New Yorker fiction writer, you will have an idea of the his level of artistry, and of the attitudes that direct his voice. Scenes such as Andy and his cousin Emmett pursuing a favorite pretzel vendor through Central Park, or a flirting girl texting Andy to find her near a nameless work of art in the Metropolitan Museum, define this novel’s world, as do scenes that take place outside of New York City. Reality filmmaker Jamie Dyer sojourning to a midnight country graveyard in Vermont, the resting place of his high school sweetheart, reformed drug addict Richard Dyer aping the attitudes of his adopted sun-drenched west-coast lifestyle, play up New York’s central role in this well-wrought world–no other place seems quite so real. The city is venerable, unapologetic, and grand, harboring lovely secrets like a nest of red-tailed hawks near Central Park, or the owner of a neighborhood burger joint who never forgets the face of an old customer, even when one returns as a tormented artist, or burnished with an L.A. tan.

Absolutely worth relishing the melange of character and evocative tableaux in &Sons, but don’t measure it too closely with your plot-mapper.